20
October
2011

Meet the Circus Galacticus!

Wow, it’s already less than a month until CIRCUS GALACTICUS goes out into the world. I just got a nice box full of author copies, so it’s finally starting to feel real.

To celebrate, I’ve put up some new content on my website: the full array of beautiful character art created by Loraine Sammy.

You can find the master list of characters HERE. There are other characters in the book, too, of course. Perhaps one day I’ll be able to share artwork of them, too!

Click on the icon to see the full art, plus a little bit more about the character. I tried not to include anything too spoilery, but if you want to be completely unspoiled for the book, you may want to just look at the pictures.

I’ll probably update the character blurbs over time, especially if people ask me specific questions about the characters after reading the book!

You can also click on the art to see larger versions if you want a closer look. I love all the little details, myself: like the pink stitching on Nola’s shoes, and the design on Trix’s boots!

06
October
2011

Reading, Lately

This was not a particularly bookish summer, as my own writing consumed a lot of my brainspace and didn’t want to relinquish it. But I did manage to get in some reading, and have been trying to catch up a bit now that I am on a break from drafting. Here are some recent favorites! You can click the links for plot summaries; I’m just going to babble about why I enjoyed them.

Note: For the sake of younger readers, I should mention that these are all YA or above in listed reading level.

A LONG, LONG SLEEP by Anna Sheehan
I fell right into this and didn’t want to leave. A gorgeous character study and the world building just slips right around you. I appreciated the variety of different interpersonal relationships all tangled up here. Note: I wanted to read this book as soon as I read this post about it by Jaclyn Dolamore (author of the beautiful YA fantasy MAGIC UNDER GLASS).

THE WINTER SEA by Susanna Kearsley
This is an adult book featuring intertwined historical and contemporary stories. I loved this most of all for the atmosphere — it was a perfect book to curl up with in a cozy chair with a cup of tea! I preferred the contemporary half of the story, about an author researching her historical subjects in a wintry Scottish seaside village. I admit I did not find the ending entirely satisfying, but I still loved the experience of reading this book, and am eager to read more by the author. Note: I had this book on my library wait list for AGES after I first heard about it from author Stephanie Burgis (author of the delightful MG Regency fantasy KAT, INCORRIGIBLE). Our Maine libraries have only one copy and when I first ILLed it I was number 23!

GIRL OF FIRE AND THORNS by Rae Carson
I do love a good secondary world fantasy with a strong female main character! I can only imagine that today’s 12 year old girls will look to this book in the same way I looked to Robin McKinley’s THE BLUE SWORD. Wonderful setting, intriguing plot twists and turns, and lovely writing. And although it’s the first in a trilogy, the ending was entirely satisfying.

JANE by April Lindner
A modern retelling of JANE EYRE. I really enjoyed seeing how Lindner paralleled the original story, but I also loved this for its own charms. Rochester reinterpreted as a rock star was particularly delightful. This one is kind of on the YA/adult border both in terms of the protag (who is in college) and the content.

ULTRAVIOLET by R. J. Anderson
A stunning and twisty genre-bending ride! But it’s hard for me to say exactly why I love this one so much without spoiling the book for those who have not read it! It is not the story you may think it is, but it’s a wonderful and compelling (and romantic, to me, at least) tale. The prose describing the perceptions of the synesthete main character are especially evocative.

THIS DARK ENDEAVOR by Kenneth Oppel
This one has a fantastic premise: the story of Victor Frankenstein as a teen, imagining what sort of events would have shaped the young man who would grow up to create Frankenstein’s Monster. I found the voice of young Victor tremendously engaging, and despite his flaws he is a bewitching character and I could not help but root for him and feel sympathy for his struggles. The external plot is exciting and atmospheric, but it was the character interactions that kept me reading. Also one of the few love triangles I’ve found believable (and it’s really a triangle: all three parties are deeply tied to one another, as opposed to the “love arrow” we see so often lately).

I’m headed to the bookstore this weekend! I already plan to get SO SILVER BRIGHT, the final book of Lisa Mantchev’s marvelous Théâtre Illuminata trilogy (really excited to see how it ends!).

What have you read lately that’s blown you away?

21
September
2011

Miscellany

A collection of the random cool-in-my-opinion stuff I’ve been accumulating lately:

~A super-cool girl doing science and making things! (Also, check out this nifty site for kits to make things yourself!)

~Want to read more about YA and MG science fiction? Then check out the Intergalactic Academy! It’s a new site but they’ve already posted some great reviews and other stuff. I am always thrilled to see scifi getting more attention, so I am very excited to see a site like this out there!

~I’ve been doing some poking around on the subject of human interaction with technology as I brainstorm a new book idea, and I’ve found a couple of really fascinating podcasts on the topic.

First, from RadioLab (and if you haven’t checked out their other shows, do — they find some amazing stuff to talk about!): Talking to Machines. Learn about chatbots that fool people into thinking they are human. And chatbots that people know are not human, but still spill their deepest secrets too. And hear about an experiment with Barbi, Furbee, and Gerbi.

And then, from Being: Alive Enough, which I found so fascinating I had to check out the book by the author interviewed in the show: Alone Together by Sherry Turkle. This explored not just human-robot interactions, but how we use social media, etc.

~Lastly, here’s a cool photo of the day: The Milky Way over the Himalayas!

Milky Way above the Himalaya

(Found via Bad Astronomy)

15
September
2011

Two Months!

CIRCUS GALACTICUS is due out on 11/15/11, only two months from now! Eek! And I just finished revising my new novel!

To celebrate, I am posting my brand new book trailer! (And using far too many exclamation marks!)

I was thrilled to be able to use some of the fabulous character art I commissioned from Loraine Sammy. I think she did such a great job capturing the personalities!

And I am also very grateful to Hubble and the ESO for making their images and videos available for use.

I hope you guys enjoy it!

Also, if you do watch the trailer, you may notice a quote from Kirkus.

A book that reaches for the stars and provides a thrilling ride.

Yep, the first industry review is in, and it’s a very nice one! I don’t even mind the fact that they think my dialogue is “occasionally melodramatic”, since they also say the “vibrant and tactile descriptions make for a cinematic read.” So, thank you, Kirkus!

18
August
2011

Miscellany

Whew. My latest draft (a nearly complete re-write) of the current project is done and off to a few generous readers. Slightly shorter and sooner than expected, but I am happy about it. I’ve been actively writing this book since January, drafting, and then re-drafting as I try to get closer to the heart of the characters and their connection to each other. I feel like this time I’ve gotten close to what I am aiming for. I know it will never be the perfect book in my mind, but I keep trying!

So I’m on a hiatus from that project for the next few weeks while I wait for feedback. It’s an awkward, at-loose-ends feeling that I bet a number of you out there recognize. You pour so much of yourself into one thing, and then you have to walk away, knowing there’s still more to do. But you also need the time away, to see it clearly.

In the meantime my head is a jumbly, rattling sort of place, filling up with tidbits of blogs I’ve been catching up on, images that might be part of brand new projects, and Circus Galacticus stuff I need to work on now that the release date is less than three months away (eep!).

Here’s a miscellany of such tidbits:

My current desktop wallpaper, to inspire me for CIRCUS stuff, like writing the character bios to go with the character art I’m going to put up in a month or so!

I love this! Una the Blade, Barbarian warrior and mother of two. Found via The Mary Sue.

I’ve really been enjoying the series of posts on storytelling at The Cockeyed Caravan (also known as Matt Bird, husband of famed librarian and kidlit blogger Betsy Bird) and now there’s a fabulous checklist that puts it all in one place. Highly recommended!

The famine in East Africa continues to horrify me, and though they are highly distressing to view, this series of photos in the Atlantic is an unflinching and moving account of the suffering. Please consider donating to one of the causes offering relief to the area.

And one business-keeping note: my website is on a new host now, which should fix the slowness issues that were cropping up last month (so if you couldn’t get to the Circus Galacticus excerpt before, try again now!). During the move, I decided to get rid of my domain email address, since I never quite trusted it. I’ve updated everywhere I can find that listed it to just use my gmail address (listed on the Contacts page for my website). Please use that if you want to email me!

01
August
2011

Working

I’m busily working away on my current writing project and having a lot of fun with this new world and new characters, hooray!

It’s been consuming my life pretty completely, however, so I’ve been on a hiatus from internet things that is likely to continue until September.

In the meantime, here, check out this fantastic documentary I saw recently on the lives of several kids involved with the traveling youth circus Circus Smirkus. I was lucky enough to see a showing, along with a short performance by some former members. There’s a trailer too, to give you a taste.

I’m hoping to see the 2011 troupe live later in August, when they come to Freeport ME!

And speaking of traveling youth circuses, here’s something I added to my website a little while ago: the first chapter of CIRCUS GALACTICUS. Whee! It’s hard to believe it’s going to be coming out in a little over three months. And I’ll be back with some other circus-related-niftiness in September, once I’ve finished my current draft.

Hope you are all having a great summer!

[Edited to add: I'm noticing some considerable delays loading pages on my website. My apologies if you have similar issues -- I'm looking into it!]

21
June
2011

Be Fearless

I’m back from my writing retreat at Niagara-on-the-Lake! It was a wonderful experience and pretty much what I would hope a writing retreat might be: full of quiet time to think and imagine, excellent conversation, good food, and fun.

I didn’t end up doing a lot of actual writing myself (though some of the other writers produced some staggering amounts of prose, or revised great chunks of their WIPs). I was still on a vacation from my current project, not ready to start revising and really trying deliberately NOT to think about it. Instead I spent my time brainstorming a shiny new story (Literally shiny. It’s about robots). But really the BEST part of the retreat was just being able to hang out, in person, with other writers.

And while in Toronto, I also managed to visit an important tourist destination:

If you don’t understand this reference and you must go watch the Degrassi series! So. Good. (I wanted to be Caitlin, the activist!)

So now I’m back home, missing my writer-friends but happy to be back with my boys. And now, finally, I’m plunging into revisions on my current project. I’ve gotten some fantastic feedback from beta readers, and I’m still really in love with the world and the story. This is a more ambitious book than anything else I’ve written, which is a good thing. But also a scary thing, because I might fail.

I’ve spent the past several days obsessing over my characters– turning them inside out and figuring out their motivations and how they fit together. On Sunday my brain was mush and I was completely overwhelmed.

That’s when Dove Chocolate came to my rescue. Not the chocolates themselves. (Though they are indeed quite tasty. Especially the caramel ones, if you freeze them first. Yum!) But the silly little messages on the wrappers.

Three chocolates in a row. Every one had the same message:

Be Fearless

Okay then. The chocolates have spoken. Look out revision, here I come!

(The even weirder thing? The last time I got a chocolate with that message was the day before the Diversity in YA Cambridge event, when I was terrified of saying something stupid and looking like a dork up on a stage next to the other fabulous authors on the panel.)

08
June
2011

Retreating

Sometimes the hardest part of writing is the not-writing.

Right now I am still on an enforced vacation from my recently-completed draft, both to allow myself to gain some objectivity about the project and to let my revision thoughts brew and stew. And it feels weird. I’m a shameless wordcount addict. I love the external validation of seeing my daily wordage accumulate.

It’s hard to remember that these between-times, these thinking-times, are just as important to the process as the active work periods: that it can be just as much “work” to synthesize critique feedback into a revision plan as it is to actually carry OUT that revision. But I know my revision will be better and more successful if I wait and give my backbrain time to mull and ponder and work things out.

One of the things I’ve been thinking about a lot is something one of my beta readers (the very wise Megan Crewe) said: “You have to know that the character as they are at the beginning of the story could not at that point have done what they need to do to succeed at the end of the story. It’s only because of the growth they go through on the way there that they can.” (Edited to add: R. J. Anderson has some interesting comments about places where this rule might not apply, over on the LJ xpost. And indeed, I don’t think any writing rule is universal, though in this case this “rule” has been helping me focus on how to (I hope!) strengthen a particular character arc. Also, Megan says she picked this wisdom up somewhere else, but I will still give her the credit for introducing it to me!)

Right now, this is true (I think!) for one of my two POV characters. But for the other, not so much… Part of the problem is that I haven’t quite nailed down her character arc. I know her backstory and emotional damage, but I need to dig deeper into what she truly needs to grow, and what scares her, and how the events of the book can force that growth and change. The other issue is determining exactly what that “they need to do to succeed” moment is — I am not entirely sure it’s the obvious one. So perhaps I need to focus more on the true moment of success.

These are all things that need thought and reflection. And time. So it’s a good time to retreat and think, to read craft books (most recently Cheryl B. Klein’s fantastic SECOND SIGHT and Donald Maass’s THE FIRE IN FICTION, both highly recommended).

Conveniently, I’m actually going off on my first official writing retreat next week! I am SO looking forward to some dedicated time to consider my revision plans, new book ideas, and more general writing-life stuff! And to visit with some fantastic fellow writers!

Those of you who have gone on informal writing retreats: what do you work on while retreating? First drafts? Revisions? Play & exploration of new ideas? Do you find retreats are especially good for any particular part of the process?

21
May
2011

Where are you going?

There’s a weird stage after finishing the first real draft of a book where my mind is just… empty. I may want to dream and scheme about a new book, or a sequel, or the plot writeups I need to submit for the next LARP event I’m staffing.

But there’s nothing. I even find it hard to read fiction. It’s as if the feelers of my brain have all been worn away, and my thoughts just slide around unable to latch onto anything. I can’t even come up with a better metaphor than worn-out brain-tentacles (ew).

Fortunately I know from experience that it goes away. The trickle of creative juice will eventually fill me back up. And in the meantime I just poke around at stuff, collecting the shiny bits, trying to tempt my brain back into action.

One of the recent shiny bits was an episode of the fabulous podcast Radiolab called Lost & Found. The whole episode is excellent, but the part I’m going to talk about here is a short segment that starts at around 32:25

In it, there’s a discussion of the language of the Pormpuraaw, an indigenous Australian people, which relies on cardinal directions (north/south/east/west) rather than left/right. Even the standard greeting is affected by this, such that you don’t say “How are you?” but rather “Where are you going?”

And if you’re local you can answer that, because you’ve been trained all your life to think in those terms. You can answer that you’re going south-southwest. Or that the salt is in the northwest corner of the cupboard. The academic being interviewed in the podcast describes that she herself began to develop a sort of new “console” in her mind that gave her a birds-eye view of her own position, after spending significant time in the community.

Neat, huh?

But there’s more. Googling for more information on the Pormpuraaw led me to this article in the Wall Street Journal.

The entire article is full of really interesting stuff. But here’s a bit I found particularly fascinating:

Differences in how people think about space don’t end there. People rely on their spatial knowledge to build many other more complex or abstract representations including time, number, musical pitch, kinship relations, morality and emotions. So if Pormpuraawans think differently about space, do they also think differently about other things, like time?

To find out, my colleague Alice Gaby and I traveled to Australia and gave Pormpuraawans sets of pictures that showed temporal progressions (for example, pictures of a man at different ages, or a crocodile growing, or a banana being eaten). Their job was to arrange the shuffled photos on the ground to show the correct temporal order. We tested each person in two separate sittings, each time facing in a different cardinal direction. When asked to do this, English speakers arrange time from left to right. Hebrew speakers do it from right to left (because Hebrew is written from right to left).

Pormpuraawans, we found, arranged time from east to west. That is, seated facing south, time went left to right. When facing north, right to left. When facing east, toward the body, and so on. Of course, we never told any of our participants which direction they faced. The Pormpuraawans not only knew that already, but they also spontaneously used this spatial orientation to construct their representations of time. And many other ways to organize time exist in the world’s languages. In Mandarin, the future can be below and the past above. In Aymara, spoken in South America, the future is behind and the past in front.

Especially as a writer, I think it is utterly fascinating that language can so profoundly affect the way we see things in the world around us. And it makes me wish I were fluent in another language (I have only a halting familiarity with Spanish that I use now days only to try to puzzle out the lyrics of the songs from my Zumba class). It would be very cool to be able to read a beloved book in another language. I have even more respect for translators now!

Have any of you read a book in two different languages? What was it like?

12
May
2011

Diverse Links

Tonight I will be at the Cambridge Public Library at 7PM along with Cindy Pon, Malinda Lo, Holly Black, Sarah Rees Brennan and Francisco X. Stork as part of the Diversity in YA Tour!

I’ve been making up lists of articles and links that I’ve bookmarked over the years, and so as a reference, in case I mention any of them tonight, here they are:

Straight Talk on Race: Challenging the Stereotypes in Kids’ Books by Mitali Perkins

Teens do judge a book by the cover by Mitali Perkins

Reflected Faces by Tanita Davis

The Elephant in the Room by Elizabeth Bluemle

Is My Character Black Enough by Stacy Whitman

Parenthetic Comma Phrases, Anyone? by Uma Krishnaswami

An Open Letter to Bloomsbury by Ari from Reading in Color

Mary Anne Mohanraj Gets You Up To Speed Pt 1

Mary Anne Mohanraj Gets You Up To Speed Pt 2

Colleen Mondor at Chasing Ray: Representing all the girls

The White Mind

I Didn’t Dream of Dragons and a followup

White Privilege: Unpacking the Invisible Knapsack by Peggy McIntosh

BOOK LISTS

African-American Speculative Fiction for Kids

2011 YA and MG POC Releases

Stacy Whitman’s List of Multicultural SFF Books

Charlotte’s Library Reviews of Multicultural Fantasy and SF

Deva’s List of Diverse Books at the Story Siren